Magazine Title Edited Further

I previously came to a conclusion with my font for my front cover of the magazine. However, when I analysed it further and placed the title on top of the main picture of the magazine the title was too over powering and too glaring. I initially wanted the title to stand out anyway so I purposely made it very bold, with bright primary colours and an even brighter yellow shadow, nevertheless, this appeared to be too bright when looked at, I didn't want it to be so bright that it looks horrible to look at, so I therefore, toned down the primary red to a more suttle, deeper, red. I also took away the yellow shadow and replaced the yellow with a light blue. This then still stands out however, its not so overbearing for the eye.